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Friday, 22 May 2020

My School Work!!!

Hello Readers,

For the past couple of days me and my class has been working on our writing. This type of writing is narrative writing. We have to write about a photo our teacher gives us. First the teacher gave us an example and then we will have to write our own story about the photo and then we do writing every day but Fridays. So I will Show you my writing but my writing is not done.











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4 comments:

  1. Nicola Scott24 May 2020 at 20:25

    Hi Tiana, I like that way you have hooked me in with your last sentence. Did she read the cookbook or listen to it? I see adverts on the television saying you should never leave your cooking unattended - I feel the rest of your story will highlight this message!

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    1. Anonymous29 May 2020 at 12:37

      Hey Miss Scott. Thank you for commenting on my blog. She did read the cook book. How do you think the story will end? Bye!

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  2. Mrs Cassidy28 May 2020 at 18:19

    I hope you plan on finishing this story Tiana as I am intrigued as to what is going to happen next.
    When I need to leave the kitchen,and I am cooking,I let my husband or daughter know so they can keep an eye on the stove.
    I look forward to the rest of the story.

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    1. Anonymous29 May 2020 at 12:40

      Hey Mrs Cassidy. Thank you for looking at this. Do you think that the mother should be careful next time?

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